The Edge Of Ourself ~ The Mountain’s Abyss

The edge of ourself

Is a jagged ledge,

Near the mountain’s abyss

With its tortured pledge.

Oh the victory climb!

With vastness & depth,

Seeks the peak of the blessed.

Rests in what we believe

As we take each step ~

To a rock we can cleave

Self taunts us with fear,

Warns don’t look down

For the schism is sheer

With no sight of the ground.

So we look to heaven

Where destiny is found ~

The Spirit lifts us

In the wisp of the wind

Lightens our load

Forgives our sin,

Knows the edge of ourself

Is no place to begin.

Valerie Hayes

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Odds & Ends ~ Life & Death

Odds & Ends ~ Life & Death

In all that is done

Under the sun ~

Though we wither away

Ego leads us astray.

The rich man dies

The same as the wise.

The wise man expires

The same as the liar –

The fool’s demise

Who shall rise?

Bent is not straight –

Fish will take bait

No matter your state.

The sun when it shines

Is not yours or mine ~

Likewise the rain

Will dampen the bright,

& Water the plain.

For long ago

Little we know

Dust took on form ~

Mortals were born,

Of rib and bone –

Not a heart of stone

But of moral decay,

Oh the price we pay –

Yet wagers abound,

Spins us around

Forces us ahead

Until we are dead

& Back in the ground.

What are the odds? 

What whirls in the wind

Knows it has sinned –

Thoughts are deep,

Before we sleep ~

What shall we seek?

A time to be meek –

For to every soul

A message was sent,

For us to repent

And though it began

It will come to an end.

Valerie Hayes

I recently listened to many awesome versions of the song “Swing Low Sweet Chariot”. One of the versions I was not familiar with is by The Dustbowl Revival. It is well worth adding to a playlist. 

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A Poem About Vanity ~ “Vanity Crows”

Vanity Crows

Oh to be so vain –

Is the shortest space

Between the plains,

The proud look ~

In the eye of the mind

Is broken and blind.

The trickster crow

Scans the lines ~

Passing the time –

As flattery goes

From Aim to Be,

A winged defeat –

As the crow flies

Soon we will find,

He has left his feet,

Beside our eyes.

Valerie Hayes

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Doorway To Denial

Doorway To Denial

You think –

I think.

I’d rather not…

Show you –

The thought

–I’ve got.

Your technique;

Interprets me –

To be…

A freak.

Like a germ –

Might I squirm;

Until you learn,

Which way to turn…

To catch it.

Make it clean;

Fix the screen.

The door unlocks,

Content shocks!

– So Latch it.

A vacuum finds;

Proud empty minds –

Closed up tight –

Sans insight.

Sucks up time

& Leaves truth behind.

Valerie Hayes

This poem was written long before covid with the germ metaphor. It seems rather facetious now.

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The Hourglass ~ Fashion Is Figurative

The Hourglass

The Hourglass Figure ~

So hotly admired;

 The “Our” need-les through –

The heart of desire,

Holds all that she dreams…

As thread from her gown,

Came apart at the seams –

She could not have known;

What she needed to mend,

‘Til she went back again –

In her search for the end ~

& The good she could find.

It was then she was shown —

How the darkest of skies –

Has put stars in her eyes ~

As she rides in that chariot,

Called the “Passage of Time”.

Valerie Hayes

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